Monday 6 August 2012

The dark house

I walk into the empty house . It was dark and I was alone . I felt so frightened and lonely. I looked around the house , there weren't any lights . The house was too dark, so I cried and I was walking through the house . I had a lights in my pocket, I used it to help me to walk easily. I used it to looking the way and looking at the wall ,too. I saw lots of pictures on the wall that show me how the people died in this house................. .
The pictures had the magic they can move like humans . Then I run faster and faster .... I herd a sound FROM the Room that stand in front of me "Come IN ! Come IN ......."the sound is like the ghost . I didn't open it , then I was walking to a hole ....... until saw a stair . While I was walking on the floor , I felt have someone behind me . Every time , I looked back I didn't see anything . Next , I was walking on the stair step by step . The stair was too long , I though I walked about an hour I stilled cannot find the end of the stair . I wanted to go back down but the stair is empty . Suddenly , there was a sound "go by this side you will.... D..... I... E ..Hahahhah " the sound is liked a magical . I walk through the way , then I saw a forest . I was so tried and the sky is dark already. I slept under a big tree , I dreamed have a god told me the way back home . I woke up quickly, after that I do like that god told me >< . Finally I saw a cottage , I knocked the door and it opened by itself . I walk to the house there are lots of old furniture . Then a witch came out asked me "why you come to my place ? Are you want to die ? " . I told her that I can't find the way back home and please you do anything for me . She agree but she need a jewel . I had only the diamond necklace that my mom gave me before she died .First, I didn't give her .I looked at it very pity that it will go away from me forever.The witch said again "Are you to die here ?" I gave her and she gave me a magical book . I opened it and say where I'm living before and it took me to my castle . Oh ! thanks you so much . Now , I come back . I felt very happy in my life cause I thought that I couldn't live in this world anymore . I didn't eat anything for many days . I'm so hungry , more ever I ran to the castle hug my father so pity . He missed me so much and was crying . I told him my story and he was crying too. Than he make a big party for me . I ate very full and live in a happy life ^.^ with my father .

5 comments:

Smart Group said...

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Smart Group said...

good working

Smart Group said...

Nice post chantrea

Fantastic said...

Well done. You wrote the very interesting story. and it's long.I hope you'll did the very good world like this all the time when you write on the blog.I like your story.

Smart Group said...

THank you ^^ much much