I walked into the empty house. It was dark and I was alone. I couldn't see anything because it was too dark in the house. I came in without knock the door because outside this house was a forest and have a very large tiger follow me. And then I shouted out loud " Excuse me, Is there anybody here? " but nobody answer my question. I though maybe the owner leave this house. I walk one step then, suddenly the light open I was very surprise... Did you know what I see? The house became luxury and very very beautiful. All of the windows & the door are make from gold and the wall had many diamond on it then I went upstairs. I saw a point ( Turn left ) on the wall then I turned left. I saw a big door that made from gold I wondered what was in that room? I wanted to opened that door but I couldn't. But while I'm trying to opened that door One paper came out from that door. There was a warning it said " If you came in you only can pick one stuff " then the door open and there was a lot of gold and diamond. I Pick up one big Diamond and I came out of that room and I ran very quickly but I fell down from the stair it was very big sound. That time the light turned off again and I was very scared because I though the owner knew that i stole their stuff. I ran off that place after that I saw a little boy is sleeping on the ground I went toward him and ask him " Are you okay" then he woke up and said " Don't kill me Don't kill.. I don want to die.. " I said " Don't be scared I'm not a bad person " He said " sister , please help me.. their was a vampire in this house.
I was very shock after I heard that. Immediately I saw a man wear black suit and walk toward me. He said " You look very tasty... I'm gonna eat you as my dinner". After that he opened his mouth I saw his scary long teeth .. I shouted NOOOOOOOOOOOOO ... Lucky that just a dream... All of my body was sweating ..
6 comments:
Nice story...... Rita
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Good Work dear my best friend Rita!!!
nice post rita! i really enjoy reading post! good job~ keep going on! :)
Your story is good I really enjoy it.I think your writing is better than me...If you try harder your writing must be good than everybody...keep working rita :)
your story is very good and long, good writing. i really enjoy your it. it was very good. I hope you can try harder with your writing...
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