Monday 6 August 2012

The ghost house

I walked into the empty house. It was dark and I was alone.I was very scared about it.I saw nothing and I walked quickly into that house and the door closed by itself loudly.I walked slowly and I heard the man shout help me me!!!!from the room. I think why did he shout? why did him stay alone in this house? Did he die or not?I walked slowly in the room and I was not saw anything. I waked to other room to find him and he came to me angrily he carry me. He asked me : why you came here? I answered him: I came here to find my sister I lost me sister. He asked me : Do you want die? I said: No no do not kill me!!! I asked him: Why did your body have a lot of blood? Did you the ghost ? He answer :Yes I was the ghost. My body have a lot of blood because someone kill me for money. I asked : Why you didn't kill someone who kill you? He answer : someone kill me was kill by the accident when this person went back. He answered me already then he went back quickly.
It was the exciting time that I can talked to the ghost.

4 comments:

dom said...

well done

chetravuth said...

I have no idea about comment but I want to say well done friend.

chetravuth said...

I have no idea about comment but I want to say well done friend.

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