Monday, 6 August 2012

THE dark house

I walked into the empty house . It was dark and I was alone I was so so scared .

I saw someone in the bedroom I walk in to the bed room. I saw nothing in the bed room and came out. I head someone said help in the bathroom. I saw nothing again . I head someone in the play the piano. I go to see it there was a woman .She have along hair . she look at me and said what do you want? I was so scared I run to the the bedroom and lock the door .I saw someone on the bed there was a deal body on the bad . I feed so scared I unlock and run in out . I saw the woman and man take the head off . I tried to get out the but I can't beause all the doors were lock . I tried to broke the door and the someone outside head they call 911 when 911 come they tried to open the door . They open and save me . So I Tell the story they don't belive me . Thy saw the dead body on the bad and ask me You kill that people ??? i say no ..........

2 comments:

Banana said...

nice work tim

Unknown said...

Yes, I agree. Nice work, Tim!