Monday 6 August 2012

The dark old woman house


I walked into the empty house. It was dark and I was alone. I am very scared about it.
I want to run out of the door but the door was closed very quickly i wanted to cry but my feel is cannot. Then, I walked into it slowly it was a sound like a old woman that shout to call somebody to help her" Help me!!!!!! help me give my money back" the old woman shouted. It makes my feels is very scared. I wanted to know why did the old woman shouted like that? why did the old woman can stayed in the house that didn't have a people staying here?Did she a ghost????. Then I think it is like a story in the book that my teacher read it for me and my friend yesterday it has the old woman too she was die by the thief come to her house and kill her by the cut the neck of her when she was sleep and take all her money she wanted to shout to her neighbors but don't have anyone care about her.
So, if somebody go into the house was die because she hated her neighbors that didn't help her. After that i think again i am her neighbors too so i need to die!!!!.

I
walked into the room that i hear the voice very slowly it was the big happen now the old woman come outside and carry my neck. She said to me angrily " Why did you come here?" " Do you want to die like me?" her eyes is too red that is a blood . She put me down and said "come out to my house" on her body is all blood and has big thing on her neck with a lot of blood than anywhere. After that she cried loudly and said " The bad thief why you kill me i am not a bad person Why why....????." Then i talked to her " don't kill the person again if you kill them can you have your life back if you kill them they will lose their life and their family too". Then she go i don't know why the i don't see anything in front of me i think she gone and the door was open very fast i ran to it. Then i ran to my house very quickly my parents found me too but they didn't see. My feel is very happy because the ghost that the people scared was gone.
It was a scary time in my life!!!!!!!!!!!!

5 comments:

The Invincible Dragons said...

Nice post

The Invincible Dragons said...

oh!I'm very scare a bout ghost!

Banana said...

How old are you now?????????
Why you scared about ghost??

chetravuth said...

Ohh. The story is long ha. Good writing :)

Banana said...

I think not so long !!!!!! :)