Monday 6 August 2012

The secret door monster


I walked into the empty house. It was dark and I was alone. So I started to walked everywhere to find a way out and I found a secret door behind the house and in the secret door I heard a loud scaring laughing noise HA!HA!HA!. It was so terrified that I started to ran away. But the house was surrounded by a big forest then I had made my decision to stayed in the house and stayed calmed. But suddenly I heard a big explosion noise from the secret door. Then I went to had a looked into the secret door and what I saw was a man with a big head and a long beard with a mustache laughing and shouting with joyed. Then I hided from him then he spoke to himself ''Ha!ha! now my invention is finally complete I had created a monster and sooner I will create hundred of monsters and take over the world.'' Then I went to called the police but my phone battery died so I had to got out of there and ran back to my home but if I ran out of the house and walked through the forest I won't be alive so I had to waited for someone to came and rescued me. When am waiting there was a snake that came out from nowhere in the house! so I was a scared and ran out of the house then the man in the secret door heard me and came out of the house and said '' Who's out there show yourself!'' Then I hided near the forest then later that man went back into the secret door then I saw a spear near the secret door. Then I grabbed it and killed the snake then I thought '' If I killed that man I will got out of here alive and safely.'' So then I held the spear with my arms and crushed through the door. But he had created ten monsters already. Then he asked me '' Who are you and why are you here?'' He asked, so I started to ran away. Then he called his monsters army to came and caught me but I hided from them. Then the monsters kept finding me then I started to stroke the man with my spear and killed him but he wasn't actually human he was a robot then I ran into the secret door and I saw a big red button that said ''This button will dis-activated all the robots'' so I hit the red button and all the robots stopped. Then my mom came and picked me up and said '' Don't ever come to this house again she said cause long ago this house was owned by a cruel billionaire man that always speak bad words to us and all his neighbors hate him.'' She said. Then I never came to this house again.

4 comments:

Unknown said...

Good, good, good...

Hots Spots said...

I wish you haven't pressed that big red button!:(

Hots Spots said...

Great job,oudom!I like your post very much.

Useful said...

Good writing oudom !!! Your story is very interesting. You make a reader want to read your story. I look forward to see your new blog oudom.