Monday 6 August 2012

The scary house


I walked into the empty house .It was dark and i was alone.The house had two floors and the house was very big and it was to old. while I was walking into the house I heard a strange sound coming out from the room and I started to walk through the door , when i opened the door it was nothing inside .And I walked ton the next room . while I was walking the door was closed and it had a strong wind and I was so scared but I still keep my feeling not to be scared for a minute later it was quiet . I tried to walked and walked until the roof of the house but when I walked on the first floor ., was very messy and dust . On the first floor it had maybe 4 or 5 room and 1 living room , and I continue to walked to the second floor . It was very frighten . I saw a shadow behind me I was so scared I shouted loudly , the shadow flew after me I tried to ran and ran very quickly . I ran until the door's house and tyhe door was closed I try to opened for 4 or 5 mn .
Suddenly I could opened the door and i went back home with my frightening ...

3 comments:

Unknown said...

There is some good writing here, Amara.

Smart Group said...

If I were in your shoe, I will faint!!! Hahaz :D .. You've done a good story, Amara :)

Dream said...

Teacher >> could u tell me where is my good writing ?
Avengers >> thz :)