Monday 6 August 2012

The Scary House


Once upon the time, I walked into the empty house. It was dark and I was alone. When I was walking through the empty forest it was cold and dark when I was walking I heard something and I saw a big house that was empty and dark but its look like an ancient house. I remember that my mum always heard my mum tell me about the ancient that happened in the forest that is a big house it's was along times ago it have a group that was walking along the forest suddenly they saw an old man he told them did not go into the big house but they did not listen to him and they started to walk into the old house and I heard my mum that told me about they go into the empty house and I was falling asleep. Suddenly, I went into the house it was very cold and I went to find the light but it was nothing. Why I went into the forest because I'm late for the school bus and I decided walk home and I walk into the forest then I lose the directions suddenly I went in front of the old house that my mum always told me about that ancient I did not wanted to care about it but when I went I went away I heard something that" help me..." suddenly I said "Who are you?"but it not answered. And then I did not care about it ....when I was walking I saw a big fire burned the house. I was scared and I was running away. I saw two polices when they saw me they told me that my mum went to find me because she did not see me and I tell them it was and ancient they said" It doesn't matter." Then I told my mum about that but she did not say anything...........!!!



2 comments:

Unknown said...

Hello, you two!

It's good work- well done!

Smart Group said...

Thz teacher