Monday, 23 July 2012

The bears in the cave

I was standing in front of the cave's entrance.Around the cave,there were seven different signs warning people to keep out.I wondered what could be in there.I had a flash light.I think that it must be some secret in there and why it had a lots of warning signs so I went in to see what in there.when I came in I saw a bear was sleeping with it baby.Then,the baby woke up and jumped on me.I scared that the bear will woke up and I ran away.I said"What a luck the bear didn't wake up". After that the baby followed me.
When I came out of the cave,I saw a baby bear was coming after me and I thought if that bear woke up I must be........so I took the baby back to the cave quietly.
 Suddenly,the bear woke up and it saw that I was holding it baby.It was very angry and it shouted" Ah.......GIVE MY BABY BACK". Then,I dropped the baby and ran away.I thought"WOOH!!!The bear can talk!That weird!". The baby followed me again.The bear was coming after me too.I said"Ooh!!my life so short I love my family I don't wanna die yet!OH GOD!what would I going do?". Suddenly,I stopped and caught the baby.Then,I gave the baby to it mom and shouted"HERE!!Take you son back". The bear stopped angry and it took the baby into the cave with her. And I came back to my house and told my mother about this cave.I swore to my mom not to go back to that cave again......because I scared that bear >.<
  THE END;P
I hope U enjoy my story...:$

6 comments:

Unknown said...

Hello, you two!

Well done, this is a great piece of writing!

Smart Group said...

thank you teacher:P

Dream said...

Your writing is good I will enjoy reading it!

Smart Group said...

thank you R-man ;)

dom said...

Well Done

Smart Group said...

thank u dom