Monday 23 July 2012

The Cave

         I was standing in front of the cave's entrance.Around the cave, there were seven different signs waring people to keep out. I wonder what could be in there. I had a flash light so i decide to go in there but one man came to stopped me and told me to stayed away from this cave, after that i went home. The next morning, i went to the cave again and tried to go in but the man came and said that this cave is dangerous, then i went back home and try to think the way to get in the cave, a few days later i have an idea to get in there, the idea is to go in the cave at night so nobody could see me. Now it is already at night, i pack some things that i could use and came in the cave silently. The cave was so dark there were water all over my feet, after that i open my flash light and look around and all the things in the cave were so beautiful but why the people warn me not to go in there?. I tried to go in the cave further and further and i saw a lots of snake in the cave.The snakes were dangerous so i run out of the cave and went to my house.After that i feel very disappointed because i didn't take the  picture of the beautiful cave but i don't worry because i had take it in my head.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Great story Pheakdey, I enjoyed reading it.

Look here *...said that this cave is danger'...'*

This would have been better had you written *...said that this cave is dangerous...*

Well done!

Simpsons said...

Thank You Very Much And I will Correct my writing

Simpsons said...

I like that picture and i like reading it.