Monday 23 July 2012

The Cave

I was standing in front of the cave's entrance.Around the cave,there were seven different signs warning people to keep out.I wondered what could be in there.I had a flash light so I went to see what is it in the cave,and why they write that signs. Then I went in to the cave suddenly I  saw a long street into the cave I was surprise because I saw beautiful forest and then I think of why they wrote it,but suddenly i heard a loud and strong sound came into the forest I went to see what happened. Wow!!It's a wonderful palace. and have a lot of people there, Look at the right I saw children played very happy.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Try writing longer stories next time. OK? :-)

Smart Group said...

Yes teacher I will try it later