Monday 23 July 2012

The box

I was walking down the street when I saw a small wooden box by the road.Suddenly, I heard a voice say "Help ! let me out of here! ''to my surprise , the voice was coming from the box. I heard like that I walk to that box. And I take it to my home. i open it....... 
When I open it I saw one boy in the box but He have 4 arms 4 eyes and 2 mouths but maybe He is a alien. I ask him '' where is your home ??? '' the boy said '' Hello ! My home is in the water ! '' oh I very scare but I want to know , so I continue ask him '' oh ! so.... who are you ?? '' I ask the boy '' I am also the people...but I live under the water '' I ask him '' so why you in this box ?? '' the boy tell me '' I am in this box !!! because have one day me and my family want to go outside the home and play together, when I at there I very happy but a bout 3 hour later have one man catch me and I don't know who is him !!! I very scare !!!! and the next I don't know why I in this box '' and I said '' so can I help you now ??? '' the boy said '' thank ! I want you to find my family can you help me ? '' and I said '' opps !! I don't know where can i find them !!! but i will try my best !!! and the boy said  '' thank '' ....
ABOUT 2 MONTH LATER 
Two month later I found one man the same this boy he has 4 arms 4 eyes and 2 mouths and I see like that I ask him '' Hello !! where you go ?? '' but the man don't answer and run away from me...one day I walk to school I saw him again but this time He come to ask me first '' hi !!! can you tell me ?? who are you ?? '' and I said '' I am the a young boy but I  saw one boy the eye the arm the mouth look like you so I want to know did you is his father ??? '' the man heard like that he cry and he said '' yes !! I lost one son I don't know where is him now '' so I took him to my home.....
when I arrived home I didn't see the boy I call  his name but I didn't hear the answer....and I go to ask my mom '' where is those boy ??? '' my mom said '' oh those boy ??? the boy that the same monster ?? right ?? '' and I said '' yes !! now where is him??? '' my mom said '' oh this boy I kick him out of my home now I don't know where is him !! Sorry son !! '' I heard like that, me and his father run and find him !!! 
A bout 2 hour later I find him under the tree !! I saw he cry his father saw him like that his father hug him and the father take his baby to home and his father said to me '' thank you so much ! '' and I smile to them and I go to my home.

                     THE END THANK FOR YOUR READING ! :)

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Alexender Lee, this is a very good post and I enjoyed reading it!

Well done and keep writing!

Useful said...

thx teacher :)