Monday 23 July 2012
THE STANGE MACHINE
My uncle is an inventor.One day,I was searching through the attic of my uncle 's house. I found a very strange machine with many buttons,knob,dials,and levers.I had never seen a machine like it before.On one side,there was a button that said {on}. I want to knew very much that what happened if i pressed that button ,so i pressed it. Suddenly a very strange sound came out of that machine. I was frighten, the sound was louder and louder.I ran out of the attic then i saw a smoke came out of the attic. My heard beat faster than normal.Suddenly i ran to my uncle and told him what was happening.Then my uncle told me to took a glasses and a mask for him.
I took a glasses and a mask for him, he wore it and ran quickly to the attic and turned off the machine. Suddenly the smoke gone and the machine was broken.At the moment, i ask my uncle what is that machine?.My uncle told me that that machine is a timer bomb and he said that this bomb would exploded if i told him late about that. :( THE END ):
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5 comments:
Hey Dom, good story!
See here *Suddenly the smoke gone and the machine was broking.*
This is a good sentence but the last words should be *was broken.*
Good writing!
oh!sorry about that teacher.I will try to write correctly for next blog.
Thank,teacher!
good writing and interesting!!!
thank,r-man!
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