Monday 23 July 2012

THE STANGE MACHINE

       
  My uncle is an inventor.One day,I was searching through the attic of my uncle 's house. I found a very strange machine with many buttons,knob,dials,and levers.I had never seen a machine like it before.On one side,there was a button that said {on}. I want to knew very much that what happened if i pressed that button ,so i pressed it. Suddenly a very strange sound came out of that machine. I was frighten, the sound was louder and louder.I ran out of the attic then i saw a smoke came out of the attic. My heard beat faster than normal.Suddenly i ran to my uncle and told him what was happening.Then my uncle told me to took a glasses and a mask for him.
I took a glasses and a mask for him, he wore it and ran quickly to the attic and turned off the machine. Suddenly the smoke gone and the machine was broken.At the moment, i ask my uncle what is that machine?.My uncle told me that that machine is a timer bomb and he said that this bomb would exploded if i told him late about that. :( THE END ):

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey Dom, good story!

See here *Suddenly the smoke gone and the machine was broking.*

This is a good sentence but the last words should be *was broken.*

Good writing!

Hots Spots said...

oh!sorry about that teacher.I will try to write correctly for next blog.

Hots Spots said...

Thank,teacher!

Dream said...

good writing and interesting!!!

Hots Spots said...

thank,r-man!