Monday 23 July 2012

The Magic Box

          I was walking down the street, when I saw a small wooden box by the road. Suddenly, I heard a voice say, "Help! Let me out of here!". To my surprise, the voice was coming from the box. When I opened the box..... Suddenly, my phone rang and that was my dad. He told me to came home now. So I took the box to my home. 
          When I arrived home, i opened the box. Very surprise!!! It was a puppy. The puppy talked to me "Thank for let me out of here". I was very afraid and then i called my dad and mum. My dad and my mum looked at it and they were very shock. My dad asked me where i took it from. I told him the truth. And then my dad asked the puppy "Where were you come from?" the puppy replied "I was come from mars". I asked the puppy "Why were u here?" the puppy said "My dad and my mom put me in the earth for 2 years because they wanted me to have adventure in the earth". The puppy continue "Could i live with u?" My dad and my mum discussed and then my mum said "OK, I let u lived with us". The puppy was very happy and jumped to my mum. I was having a very good time with the puppy. Everyday We were played ball together. Sometimes I took the puppy to the park. I was very happy when i played with the puppy. I always took the puppy to sleep with me. I never happy like that before.
2 Years Later.........
          My dad and my mum told me that It's time to took the puppy to home. I didn't want to let the puppy go but i can't. The puppy told me to take him to the old place where i took him. When they got on the sky , they said good bye together to my family and go away. 

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey, I don't know who wrote this. Can you please go back and put in your label? Thanks!

Useful said...

I Put Already Teacher!

Useful said...

Good writer ! :-)

Unknown said...

Thanks, Vicheka.
Good writing!

Useful said...

Yeah Thanks Teacher